ElohimOfHope

The novel can make readers feel the way Mc's action is. I could picture the world and the game it described. The character of MC is also good and shows brilliantly. Plot is also good and reading this can ease your body and mind. If you wish to read something light and humourous then you should definitely read this

The novel is top notch filled with adventure and mystery. The main character has a strong mindset and not going after woman to make them his toy. There is use of common sense in this novel which I rarely find in many novels. It is also fun to read the dialogue and conversation between mc and other people. The fight scene has been depicted properly.

I like the route peter is taking. It hooked me right away watch his struggle. It has also made me emotional seeing mc struggle. The plot is good and a bit different from other fanfics. The development of peter is worth to watch.

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Indeed he get ntrd but the main character foes not have any feeling for those women. So I guess for the protagonist point of view it is not an ntr

This novel is very good. The concept of ntr is hard to swallow for anyone but author has made the novel interesting and exciting. The main character's personality is not like wannabe hero but a true hero.

Get lost idiot.He is a child. Even adults react worse than this. How can you expect a child to calmly deal with it. Huh, idiots comment without even applying that in their own life

It is a fantastic story. The plot makes a lot of sense than something gibberish. I like the personality of Harry Potter and the book is amazing. The story makes you feel to turn the pages and it is worth to read for those who want and intelligent, cunning mc

this is one of the best novel I have read till now. The personality of main character makes you hook to the novel. The other character are also potrayed nicely. It is fun to read and plot is also very nice.

Thanx for the advice. I had just decided to drop this no el and write the novel I had decided first