BigBoyJenkins

Where does it tell us family loyalty ?

I will start reading this when you show that you will not drop it soon.

I want to see the mc become a leader, help peoplw grow stronger, create a city when the systen works( the city system) where people want to go to , to become strong and be respected . I really dont want this to become a gun-ho nove where the mc just keeps going from place to place instead of trying to create their own faction

Honestly for the free available chapters i find this to be a really good novel so far. There isn’t much more i could as for other than more chapters daily but if we are getting chapters of this quality then im all good with the author to continue at their current pace.

Hey author this paragraph could be fixed( not hate just wanna help out)

Hey author, few spelling grammar mistakes here that you might wanna fix

If only they knew that Awe doesn’t do things like factions.at least not until the end, where they are pointless. Maybe this will be different who know, but chances are the mc will keep jumping into risky situations and making stupidly strong enemies and constantly have to pick up after his friends get slaughtered, kidnapped or left behind

At of chapter 4( most chapter available right now) i will say im already heavily invested and hope the author starts and keeps this novel going. Already love the power system and how it works

Will do

Really tried to enjoy this book i did. But if the mc is talk no justued out of beating up his bullies and lets a system talk shit constantly when the system wouldn’t even fullfill its mission without him im good. You ever decided to rewrite this, take away the systems personality and get the mc to pay those who wronged him back