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The story is fantastic but the languaje is a problem. I would recommend have someone proofreading the chapters before being published. Even so it’s entertaining and i wish you luck

How does one become a bad person looking out for others?

I think what Yoze did was over the top for the situation

I love the name

If I was a debtor I wouldn’t look for the moneyless child, I would for the fleeing wife. I mean, she is not a spy, I don’t think she would dissappear perfectly.

I am sorry for your loss

I want to give you a moment to think what you just said

Really? Walking dead. The moment I see a zombie I’m dropping the novel. It’s good but you can’t having all.

In that moment is extremely important the presence of a hobby. It can be something simple like playing games, exercise, chess, or something more complex like writing a book, carpentery or even planning a future income. You can’t let the monotony get you