I’m sorry, but those who pity the villains are weak because they neither sympathize nor empathize with their “victims”; so, it’s wise to use a heavy with them because they wouldn’t be soft.

The reveal was anticlimactic regarding Linda. All these chapters with her schemes and lengthy verbal insults, the end is a “no” and a quiet whisked away? It would be nice to show her mental breakdown after she learned about Kathleen’s true identity.

No, she should be in jail for kidnapping Kathleen.

*classified not classy information

*failing (not flaunting) to complete my orders

Wasn’t Mabel the assistant to Linda at the beginning of the story?

*butted not buted

I thought the boss of the Dark Organization “took care” of Linda.

I guess the author remembered the banquet after all. It took long enough; one month in this book spans almost two hundred chapters.

I hope Kathleen doesn’t forgive Mrs. Hudson so quickly.

*bellied not belied

Oh, so you do have some self-awareness.

You wouldn’t have believed her then just like now.

🤦🏽‍♀️

Really? You’re too arrogant; Linda screwed you over more than once, with each worst than the last.

I thought there was a banquet planned to announce Kathleen’s identity as Janice Wyatt. The author mentioned this earlier in the book wherein it was a month away; it seems the writer forgot just to prolong the worst kept secret. Kathleen looks like her mother, father, and brother with distinct features (e.g., face, eyes, hair), yet no one can see the obvious.

*soothed not sooted

*Their IQs are exceptionally high.

*in order is two words not one

*you can kiss this alliance goodbye