The_Jagger_

Absolutely, all the interactions between these two are natural and completely in line with their personalities, it is incredible how well the author has built these characters.

The gist of it all is "I'm weak-willed and weak-minded, I was raised to think the world owes me something and I get frustrated by anything halfway difficult, so if I'm unable to adapt to the world I'll literally throw a tantrum expecting the world to adapt to my whims."

I just came across this story by chance, regardless of its quality I think it has some excessively unpleasant criticisms, as someone who tries to write from time to time, I know how difficult it is to start and even more to maintain it and I think it is worthwhile that you have reached more than 200 chapters, my advice to you is not to give up, but to take your story and rewrite it for yourself, or publish it, but do not pay attention to destructive criticism, rewrite it, try different structures, change descriptions, improve them, investigate, document yourself, do what is necessary to make it to your liking, because in the end, that is what matters, people would hate your story even if it was excellent, you continue with your thing and do not give up on your dream. Good luck friend

Keep this up for the love of the gods.

I was just reading the raws because it's a story I enjoy, I even wrote to the translator of "Lord of the Flame", another excellently translated Game of Thrones fanfic exactly yesterday to take a look at this fic, the very next day you uploaded the best translated chapters there could be, it's an incredible coincidence and just for that I'll give you 5 stars, I hope you continue translating this so well.

Hey buddy, I want to thank you for the translation and also recommend that you translate this new Game of Thrones fanfic, Game of Thrones: I Loaded the Witcher System. (权游：我加载了猎魔人系统), the truth is that I enjoyed it quite a bit even as poorly translated as this one, but since it's in the vein of the previous one you translated, you know, system, dragons, kingdom building, it would be great if you'd give it a go, as well as recommending that you read it for your enjoyment of course. Greetings, buddy.

I was just thinking about this fanfic and you appear, friend, thanks for the chapter

Very good translation, does a good job of adapting it to make it enjoyable, has good grammar and daily updates, you can't ask for anything better 10/10

The story is over, the author stopped writing but is still relatively active, so I'll just say that I really enjoyed your story, which should be the main goal of anyone who writes one, so congratulations my friend, you now have a small permanent space in my mind.