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Violet9

Violet9

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I write fantasy and science fictional stories. SCU2022

2021-01-14 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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16.8h

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    Violet94mth
    ตอบกลับถึง Londoner2

    Thank you :) I appreciate it.

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    Violet94mth
    ตอบกลับถึง LindaLight

    Thanks for your feedback! I would like you to know what you mean by “write blindly” so I can improve. Can you elaborate?

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง SarushiroEruma

    YES!!! [img=recommend]

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง SarushiroEruma

    That was definitely my plan. The idea is that he never acts independently and relies on everyone to get the job done. Thanks so much for your review! I’ll definitely go back and proofread a ton after I release my 10th chapter! [img=recommend]

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    Violet93yr
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    Super descriptive on the world! Makes me feel like I'm in a real-life anime! I can totally envision this happening. The beginning part is a little fast though, but I'm very impressed with the writing quality overall. I'm also a bit new to this entire parallel universe thing, but it's really interesting. I'm excited to read more!

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Nomed_Forcraziness

    Thanks for reading! I'll definitely go back once I've written a bit more and improve my grammar!

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Strawberryfishcake

    Totally a possibility! 😂 Thanks for reading, (if you did) I appreciate it!

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Kate_Viray_7972

    Hello! Thank you so much for your review. The idea is that aliens have slightly more strength and better brainpower than humans. You'll get a vast majority of aliens to be a lot smarter and faster than them. That's why they're faster workers and more capable of multitasking. But I'll fix that and make it more clear. And yeah, I agree. I just wanted to show how the economy went utterly haywire after the aliens started inhabiting Earth. I'll remove that! Thank you for your feedback! I hope you enjoy reading more later on! [img=recommend]

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง zd4zaaa

    Thanks for your review! Unfortunately, I'm not seeking to monetize my writing. Just doing it for fun and looking to improve. Thanks for your offer!

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง DaisyDandala

    Thank you so much! [img=recommend]

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    Violet93yr
    ตอบกลับถึง ReinuxMS2_MS2

    Thanks for your feedback!

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