Very Disappointing start. I don't see this story going anywhere I like. Mc is literally a slave and it is even insinuated that he was plotted against by rias to be one. I guess the MC just replaced issei in the story and it will continue as cannon with minor differences. Very Interesting idea but a very disappointing and frankly annoying execution.

How this trash keeps getting popular is something I don't get. The writing is mtl quality. Story development is on some grass. Characters are held on gunpoint to interact or so it seems. Overall a heaping pile of cringy garbage that people somehow keep making popular. I am not above reading some bad writing and dialect and enjoying them but this I just couldn't enjoy.

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I don't even know how this got into the rankings and don't feel like writing a big ass review. So, two words Dog doodoo. Story is so bad it's like eating a favour less Curry.

Mad confusing story, Mc's background is non existent. Most of the time was spent feeling slightly confused. Don't get me wrong the story isn't bad but rather average. It feels like reading a book that you skimmed over and then reading that book's sequel, you kind of understand what is going on but at the same time don't. The three stars is for the decent story but the plot's all over the place.

I like the allies thing but should have given Alex something to make himself a bit stronger.

ngl Mei literally feels like a gold digger and that's rubbing me the wrong way.

We are far too in the rabbit hole to back out as straying from the harem route will inevitably leave a bitter taste.

The story isn't bad but I'm 8 chapters in still no sign of any chat group. A day of school alone took like 7 chapters and the chapters are long like 4kish words. The grammar is good, characters are decent but the snail as* pace kills it all for me. I won't tell you to not read it but you have been warned.

It took ma man 8 Fu****ng chapters to get even remotely close to any kind of chat group. Not my cup of tea. I like me some slow pace but this sh** is snail pace.

Ngl, the romance scenes/18+ are absolute shi te.

Idk if it's just me but it feels like the grammar went down a level in this chapter.

THIS FANFIC IS A COPY OF "DXD:REKIBA". Trash🗑️ people doing even more trashy things. Absolute Re***d.

He looks like a "female dog" still ngl, mainly cuz of the face.

The writing quality is quite good but there is no character development. This got boring very fast. Interactions between characters feel "unnatural". Even if you want to pass time reading this you will get bored very fast.

The author is very talented and clearly has experience. All of his stories are top middle tier. I recommend people to read these because these are better than 90% of garbage on this platform. Excellent story development, good but not best dialect I'd say 7.5/10, 6/10 on the relationship realism and overall common sense which is way better than some of the crap on this app that tops charts. The world background is very good 8/10, character development is I'd say 6.5/10. The problems with the authors's works are the hard focus on jaune arc and rwby, which I don't mind but it would be better to see something else. Another thing is I'd like to see the author make a non OP fic and based on another universe. The op ness of the Mc makes for a semi bland fic that makes fights feel bland. I'd say to refine your action scenes a bit more because in my opinion that is your weak point. Refine the character developments and introduce a bit of realism even if it is anime realism in your works to make the work feel a bit more alive. I wholeheartedly support the author don't be discouraged by my ratings and I hope you continue to improve