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WhiteDeath16

WhiteDeath16

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  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath1618 days ago
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    Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars. I would love any feedback you guys can give. This is my third original novel, with the first one still ongoing. Feel free to also treat this as a Q/A session.

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath162 months ago
    Replied to KaratePepe

    Takes about a month of training to reach 2% since four years for him equals 100% mastery. Of course, its faster in the beginning which was why he reached it faster.

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath163 months ago
    Posted

    Following the example of every author, I will be giving my story 5 stars. This is the rewrite of my second original novel with the same name that has now been deleted. I am going to try to make this one much better than it was before by changing many elements of the novel. Feel free to treat the comment section as Q/A and any feedback is greatly appreciated!

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath163 months ago
    Replied to SurvivingPandas

    He's uncertain about his place in the world since he doesn't know if he will be in the world after the "ending" or whether the girls won't go on to like Lucifer like they did in the novel. He accepted this world as a world instead of a novel but is still torn.

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath166 months ago
    Replied to Hermes_FENG

    It did say that God's Eyes is more powerful.

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath166 months ago
    Replied to Vio_Zero

    He's quite far from spear intent since he's only reached blood level in spear.

    This book has been deleted.
  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath166 months ago
    Replied to ItBeLikeThat

    Sadly strength alone isn't enough to climb ranks, especially not at a young age.

    This book has been deleted.
  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath166 months ago
    Replied to viorion2

    She's 14 years old never even seen blood as a sheltered princess almost forced to go to a battlefield, give her time, not everyone is a reincarnate like the MC or a super genius like Rachel.

    This book has been deleted.
  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath167 months ago
    Replied to Faier

    Too many people thought it was already heading in that direction even tho it wasn't so instead of editing the previous chapters to fit no harem I decided to change it.

  • WhiteDeath16
    WhiteDeath167 months ago
    Replied to Darth_Evolution898

    True that will be explained in the future dw, there is reason the temple was the way it was.