alice_76
hello
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it might just be a me problem but I found it anyways so its all good
I don't see the link?
I love the story and your writing style its very interesting, I also like the mysterious ness it makes me want to read more, I just catched up in like a day. I also just want to say when you describe a character could you be a bit more specific with like hair and face? I find it hard to imagine nox when you say short hair, hair color and eye color for him, but other than that everything is 100/10. keep going i love your work and you are amazing!!
I will be happily waiting for the rewrite when you come back. I love this story a lot and I think its amazing but I guess as an author you can see your own flaws or weaknesses clearer then everyone else. Anyways do your best and take breaks when needed! ❤❤
I imagine Johnathan looks like Jonathan Joestar but I keep on forgetting he doesn't
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