TheSleepingCow

The writing quality is good but the story makes you lose brain cells. Turn off your brain if you want to read it. It’s ok until he randomly changes universe for no good reason and immediately get attached to rimuru. Also his personality changes every chapter.

You should use a program like grammarly or something. It’s free and makes reading your stories much easier :)

Bro….. lmao

Same :/. Pure paiiiiiinnnnnnn. Where will I read trash novels i can distain from the bottom of my heart but still read cuz i have nothing else to do…. (This story is not included in that list)

Nah you good. I wasn’t berating him tho. I was just helping him. I didn’t think i’d be considered rude.

This is a not his story! He copied it from someone on scribblehub! Check out the original here https://www.scribblehub.com/series/437465/other-world-chimera-naruto-fanfic/

Thanks :)

Omg no way!!!! I thought for sure yuna’s adventure would end! I’m so happy it isn’t! I can’t wait to see Yuna’s crazy heavenly ice divine zanpakuto.. :)

Hey were did you get your dover picture?? It’s amazing!

This was an excellent story. I’ve been reading since before 20 chapters have dropped everyday and it honestly was my favourite part of the day sometimes. Watching the adventures of Yuna xD. It’s kinda sad to see it end but also just… right? Yeah lol. Alright have a good time man and good luck in your future works!!