Floridaboytonio

Keep up the good work

Here’s my honest opinion, story is too repetitive and predictable at this point. Mc is never able to iso Reina and actually make a move before Mina barges into the scene, which makes me the reader irritated with her character. Pacing is slow in terms of romance development, we’re almost 30 chapters in and none of them have identified how they feel about the Mc and vice versa. Just feels like a story that won’t go anywhere and is just slice of life with the Mc being teased 30% of each chapter

I think he meant being killed by sunlight

Is this the last chapter boss?

I’ve seen this chapter before idk if you stole it from somewhere else, or if you wrote this story before and you’re reuploading it. Just alotta Deja vu

I wouldn’t be disappointed if Sakura was his woman before Ichinose

Ahhh, the reupload the same chapter multiple times trick. I see how this is gonna go so I wont hold my breath

1520 is the start so approximately 9 years until Luffy starts his journey

It’s not unrealistic for ppl of a certain status to get away with atrocities. Doesn’t make it right but it’s not something new, some pure bloods were able to murder muggles and get away with it, rape and murder are in the same tier in my eyes. If they can get away with murder they can also get away with rape.

Only explanation for that would be orthostatic hypotension which should’ve been happened not 20/30 mins later