Yama_Kame
I'm a novice writer, lived in Japan for a few years, and was married to a Brazilian-Japanese for nearly five. If you're reading this, be nice to my novel and let's talk. :)
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Yama_Kame4dตอบกลับถึง Darth_Evolution898"We basically work as a sort of hivemind now, huh?" said the steel Automaton to the original him.- Yama_Kame4dตอบกลับถึง Underworld16...
- Yama_Kame5dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"Damn reptile, you've hoarded food." The troll roared in fury, slapping Xu Yang on the body and flinging him two meters away.
- Yama_Kame6dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วFang Hao nodded, he too had thought of the two-handed white steel sword, but he wanted to hear others' opinions.
- Yama_Kame7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"That's just how I am, Laplace. And despite being a dragon, you're as beautiful as you were before. Perhaps, a bit better." Abraham found the eastern dragon form awesome.
- Yama_Kame7dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว| It ain't baseless if every moment you talk to the dragoness. You try to charm her with your maxed-out speech of eagle freedom. |
- Yama_Kame8dตอบกลับถึง TheFooLHearing his words, Laplace got out of her trance and glimpsed at the handsome middle-aged man beside her. A pleasant smile formed on her face as she responded.
- Yama_Kame8dตอบกลับถึง Mister_Archon
That's almost certainly true about her jumping off the ship. It's just that the paragraph tipped me over the edge on "why" they're developing a relationship and how unnaturally fast it's developing. Beautiful women are a dime a dozen, and the MC's immediate fixation on her appearance for the last half dozen or so chapters and almost certainly her "amazing" upcoming performance in this battle is mentally exhausting for me. I'd much rather see the MC be in a relationship with an ugly village girl than a Mary Sue. With that said, I am fully enjoying nearly every other facet of this story!
"Laplace!" Abraham reached out his arms as Laplace fell into the rough waters of the high seas. His thoughts rumbled with anxiousness, thinking of what to do. - Yama_Kame9dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วThey would swiftly rush to the enemy's city, ignite the bomb in their hands, and self-destruct along with it.
- Yama_Kame9dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
I can't see how he can be so emotional towards one slave he saved when he doesn't treat the other 100+ as such, especially when there's elderly and almost certainly children on board as well. Simply, I believe this character relationship isn't natural enough.
"Laplace!" Abraham reached out his arms as Laplace fell into the rough waters of the high seas. His thoughts rumbled with anxiousness, thinking of what to do. - Yama_Kame11dตอบกลับถึง AntiSimp_Org
I guess you and the author are not particularly nice. The GIF was in reference to the US president having marines as part of his protection and transportation.
Getting a personal guard wasn't out of the possibilities that appeared in his mind, but being followed by someone else was discomforting for someone like Abraham. - Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"I must say, Laplace. You are honestly the most beautiful woman I have ever seen. You're a charming and gorgeous lady," There were no lies in his words.
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
If blood/race is mentioned in dragon stories, it's typically maintained that purity is an absolute must. Her not being r@¢ist and finding him interesting, maybe even as a partner, is a little cringe.
Hearing his words, Laplace got out of her trance and glimpsed at the handsome middle-aged man beside her. A pleasant smile formed on her face as she responded. - Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วAbraham shook his head when he heard of Systema's words and looked at the dragoness with deepening interest. A smile emerged on his face as his conversation with the radio operator concluded.
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว| Judging from her body language and movements, I have deduced that she's lovingly listening to your conversation like how one would listen to a radio. |
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"I have the same thoughts, Abraham." A playful smile was on Laplace's face, making Abraham unknowingly shiver. It was like being stared down by a predator.
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"That is understandable. When you are in a precarious situation, it will be hard to prioritize others who aren't connected to you in any way." Abraham understood the sentiment of priority.
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วWith this in mind, he arrived at his greatest decision that he wouldn't regret throughout the entirety of his life. It gave him a powerful ally and perhaps…
- Yama_Kame11dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วIn the fortified vault imbued with various runic enchantments and secured with several chains, a gorgeous white-haired lady lay shackled at its center. Quite contrasting appearance from the monster-like imprisonment.
- Yama_Kame12dเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว"The magi are probably interested in something like her, one of a kind. No, perhaps, four of a kind. The rarest of all beastfolk, and the strongest at that."