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JFLGoiri

JFLGoiri

Lv15
2020-12-25 เข้าร่วมแล้วUnited States
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri9mth
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    And said what? Adui this is very confusing

    "..."
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri9mth
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    Please stop. I‘m enjoying the story so far but his is to co fusing.

    Noah's will calmed as it seemed he had to quickly learn how to deal with this vibrant new will!
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri9mth
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    What knowledge? Author so far you only share Noah’s reactions. Not a single line of comments from the new entity. This is two confusing.

    The words were veiled in mystery as this voice purposefully chose to withhold crucial information.
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri9mth
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    Author, I don’ know if you are trying a new style but not showing any of the actual comments from this new entity is confusing. You did the same with the will from the forgotten reality. It’ hard to follow, please reconsider.

    A foreboding sense of silence ensued for the first time since this treasure began talking, Noah waiting patiently as after a few seconds…
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    Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง LeoStriker23

    On the previous DND campaign I played my character was a healer clad in heavy armor and wielding a spear + shield. My domain was war and used to play in the front lines… A.LOT.OF.FUN.

    His partner was like a wall, refusing to take even a step back. He blocked strike after strike with his heavy shield, lashing out from behind it with a short spear from time to time to keep the enemies from simply overwhelming him with their size and mass. This was the healer of the cohort, so his fortitude and grit came from his physical prowess alone, not from any kind of Ability.
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    Shadow Slave
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Ben_Blakley

    Not necessarily, residual images are more related with our brains capacity to process our environment. For a quick experiment go ahead and take two coins in between your index and thumb, now move them very fast agains each other… if you do it right you will see a third coin, this is the residual image and this happens without reaching the speed of light… not even close. In other words a residual image it’s really just an optical illusion, a mind trick of some sort.

    He was so fast that even the laws of the world took a moment to realize that what had been frozen was not him but a residual image so there was no way the 9-Headed Immortal Dragon could keep up with him!
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
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    That’s cool but what if one of them was using the bathroom right when he pulls them out of the pocket world? ?

    Bai Delan didn't understand what his son meant by "we" if he even wanted Meng Qi to stay behind, and it was just then that four flashes of white light shot out from Bai Zemin's chest.
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheRealDW

    E mail

    Ch 979 The last gift and the last words of the Queen
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · XIETIAN
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheRealDW

    B as vr

    Ch 979 The last gift and the last words of the Queen
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · XIETIAN
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri1yr
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 60 Plans to go out of university
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    Blood Warlock: Succubus Partner in the Apocalypse
    แฟนตาซี · XIETIAN
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
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    Zora

    All the humanoids had faces with no nose nor ears. They breathed through gills on their necks and heard from two small holes on either side of their head. They had no lips either, leaving the row of pearly teeth in their mouth partially exposed at all times.
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    Supreme Magus
    แฟนตาซี · Legion20
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Seishi_

    Thanks for the review and the good wishes. I hope that you continue to enjoy Charlie's adventures.

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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
    แฟนตาซี · JFLGoiri
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Yoongi_BreadCheeks

    Thanks for you patience, I had veen waiting for the pilot read to select this weeks novels before releasing new chapters (the don’t select nivels with more than 10). The good news is that a they selected the book for this week AND there is a bew chapter out. I hope you enjoy it!

    Ch 10 The plan
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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Mel_Aniv

    That is awesome! Thank you for the support. I hope that you continue to enjoy it 😊

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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    Very engaging story! The character interactions and descriptions can seriously get you hooked. Nice setting too, it seems like a lot of adventure is coming!

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    Hehe okay
    แฟนตาซี · Seishi_
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    The Book opens up nicely and is very engaging. I think ot makes for great reading. The concept is quite unique abd doesn’t feel repetitive. Keep writing author!

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    Descent To The Throne
    แฟนตาซี · Stantheman132
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Stantheman132

    Thank you for bringing up the mixed spelling of Johnny's name. I will get it all fixed ASAP. If you see any more let me know.

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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Stantheman132

    Lol, I'll fix it now. The correct spelling is Johnny.

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Ezckapel

    Thank you! I also want to see what will Charlie be up to in the future.

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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • JFLGoiri
    JFLGoiri2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    Very interesting story, it is written in first person which creates a sense of connection with the MC. Beautiful writing style. You will enjoy it if you like this genre.

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    The Warrior's Story
    แฟนตาซี · Mediocre_author
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