Monocle_GentleSir
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What a piece of $h*t criminal you are you just plagiarized someone else's book and is making money from it. Anyway, nothing more to say for a piece of dog$h*t like you the real book is called A Dragon's Roar by spectre4hire It is posted on fanfiction.net and is already completed hopefully the readers see this review before the pile of dog$h*t deletes this post
you seem to have not watched the third movie properly. Change the oogway part
lazy
just put 8 pm 9 pm or 10 pm just like a normal person an orphanage is not military lol
If you need time to rest do so. I hope for your fast recovery.
The author keeps switching between the two seems like he can't make up his mind about who is older.
DF you just said that Skyler is the youngest son in the earlier chapter. So how could Draco be younger than him??
Bro is preordering
Yep, taking a break would have been better than rushing the fic. Adios.
Bro, you need to research what you are writing about.
Yep, it just makes the author's rant stupid. We are not even 100 chapters yet the author already has dementia.
explain
You don't use "their" on a single individual.
Lazy writing at its finest
That is very interesting
hopefully, the grammar will improve as you write more and not outright ignore the mistakes you noticed out of laziness.
Considering the pace of the story is currently going it would be really weird for Narutoxkushina pairing. Even though you already warned us in the synopsis I think you approached this the wrong way author knowing what might happen later on leaves me in bad taste. The writing quality is really good though tbh.