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What about his sister? Shouldn’t that be his priority at the moment?

This whole chapter felt like a draft, it reads like speaker notes

Pretty generic wish fulfillment story, it’s not bad but it’s not good either. There are hundreds of novels on here that follow the same tropes in this story, although the grammar is pretty good for Webnovel

Doesn’t the twinkling mean he’s mind reading them?

It’s a pretty good story and worth reading despite some of the issues it has. There are small spelling and grammar errors here and there but it’s not that bad, the story development is pretty good, although it’s really rushed in some areas. There are a lot of important or interesting events are that get completely skipped over with only a sentence or a paragaph mentioning what happened. An example would be the birthday party he had, it would have been really interesting to read about that and how all the characters would interact with each other but it gets completely skipped over.