Safiya_NM

good luck next time

tip: don't use the same words in a single sentence

gay bulge

this is a basic spin , NOT an advanced , how in the world did he get such op abilities from them

sure suits yourself

i REALLY like your fanfic, and was an old reader of it , so I am warning you that you are making mc too op, this is the same mistake you did in the bleach world, the mc is calculative and manipulative , but those traits will not shine if you give really powerful abilities like this. I know that this is your fanfic, and you can do anything, you can make him op without giving him a golden spoon like this.

that's not class

that pun.... physically hurt me.

if you do send him to any game please do it in moderation