Divine_univers

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

loved the novel for the most part, at the end there I was confused on if Theron actually got stronger in heavens gate or not it didn't really explicitly say especially when he came out and pretty much one shotted bamby and Kenton, unless i skipped a chapter without realizing it

I like these chapters same time though I'm gonna wait awhile to binge read at this point cause i can tell this is gonna take a minute to get through

for daoist arts I think what you did was fine i just feel like you over explained some of the parts which made it last a few more days then I thought was necessary

listen i get it but spending multiple chapters and days on upgrading arts is just sheesh

finally

love the story so far, also update the intentions/pairs of eyes chapter

probably a good thing you toned it down not even just for me but the rest of the audience extreme gore especially against children even if it's a story tends to be a turn off I've definitely dropped stories cause they've gotten to dark for my liking this wasn't that but it got close that's for sure. obviously i love the story otherwise I wouldn't be spending 50$ for coins for privilege

yeah didn't have a new born being ripped apart and pulverized on my list when i read the warning

pacing is definitely the one thing I've noticed most web novel authors struggle with. which also goes hand in hand with detail, give to much and slow down the story exponentially or go to fast and give to little detail and then idk wtf is going on