I read a book like this one, once a long time ago however it ended abruptly, the world building is amazing and for once i relate to the mc, without the handsome, all powerful stuff but still relate

pretty boring begging, takes to much time on one person, how are you intertwining Norse mythology, and jujutsu Kaisen like what? please get some better story development

thats all I guess since other thieves didn't get the spotlight

guy who teleported Jace

anti social girl

and also i think your book is absolute garbage I would love to hear your argument

This kid making trouble with everyone in the reply there's something called *freedom of speech* and an *opinion* you call others ignorant but you don't even know what these 2 things are I stated so, please stop making issues because not everyone thinks what you think he might have his own definition and also *** isn't swinging so get a life

thx for the chapter dude

Good book nice plot nice characters quality of your writing is perfect I do like how you use you not u overall it's a nice book and I hope to see you write more

broke boy, I mean um Jace's friend of course

good book the main character looks good the plot and character just go together well making this a top their story I am an author myself but you're honestly wayy better than me

Han Daewi

ill make 3 more chapters tomorrow just for you

I am giving this a good rating as a fellow new writer myself if someone gave me a bad rating I wouldn't like that so I gave you this so you can know you're not trashing at writing

try refreshing the thing, i updated just for u

Yes, I am ashamed to be giving myself a review but I think I deserve it :))) yall do to right? tell me you are if not break a leg :)) bruh i need to right more to right a review there not it worked

The girl with the sword

The person who tried hitting the main chacter

Main Chacter