An aspiring author and avid enjoyer of lores and mythology behind anything xianxia, xuanhuan, western and indian fantasy.
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AS OF CHP 38 Nothing Seems Cringe, Story flows smoothly without logical flaws and disturbing immersion by something stupid. MC and Other Character Personalities are good as it is. The pace of story is superb , without filler and fast paced but not too much fast paced. World-Building is Simple yet Mysterious and things and clans are shown step by step. Wish Well to this Book, this should get more Views.
is MC like this in his next life as well ??
i like the way mc thinks.haha.
it is indeed.
Amen to That
Fuck the Simps. literally , so that they know its not worth it.
Yes, i thought it was a potential SHIP, but now i get the feeling that she might not be the one . i like the later aspect where they go their own ways, But very few novels manage to pull that off. lets hope .
Damn! so much new chapters. is this what you said by slow release. lol. Keep it coming.
There are some lines that is harder to understand, for me at least. but so far it is good.
So far everything is good and enjoyable. do keep on. also try to stock your chapters and publish chapter daily instead of publishing 3,4 chapter at once as it may be difficult to come up with new chapters daily....this something i learnt later too , but apparently it helps to gain traction of the novel.