Alisa_Leslie269

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Just trying to make my dreams come true......

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Alisa_Leslie2692 years ago
Replied to Priscilla_Ansong
https://www.webnovel.com/book/follow-through_19133137805376105 There it is! let me know what you think
Hellbound With You
แฟนตาซี · KazzenlX
Alisa_Leslie2693 years ago
Replied to rskdrama
Actually I didn't lock my chaps from 13, I'm trying to have that fixed because it's supposed to be locked from 21.Not everyone will like my book and that's ok but before you judge or criticize my writing how about you work on writing a paragraph that's actually coherent,if you even know what that word means 😊
Follow Through
แฟนตาซี · Alisa Leslie
Alisa_Leslie2693 years ago
Replied to Obin_Nii
hmm,guess you can't see the commas,hyphens or full stops.If you don't like it,you don't have to keep reading
There's that static again.Just what sort of weird Alice in Wonderland crap is this? While my brain tries to catch up,my body is thrown unceremoniously on what feels like large marbles.Unbelievably my eyes and nose register what appears to be.....gumballs? My brain skitters awake as my eyes once again widen to saucers.There are millions of red,blue,purple,pink,orange,green and heck I don't know the names of all those other colours,but I'm sure every single shade on the spectrum is represented here,balls of glittery sugary gum underneath me and I lay there,my torso twisted and supported by my forearms,my legs folded at the knees,just staring with my hair forming a curtain around my face.Definately putting 'haidresser' on my to-do- list.That normal thought seeps through my trance-like state and my head lifts.Then bam,back in the trance I go.This 'in shock' thing is becoming my new norm.Im surrounded by that weird foamy fog.It's thick and glows uncannily blue.I can only see through it if I focus on certain spots and man when I do this place just gets stranger and stranger.As far as I can tell I'm in some sort of forrest but these trees seem to be....melting? And they're not green either but a weird hazel colour and every single one of them is dripping brown goo,with folds of the stuff running down the trunk.My ears pick up the 'plop plop' they make and I stand,my incredulity still firmly in place.I take two steps,my curiosity piqued, because I swear that stuff looks-and smells-like rich chocolate,but I'm halted by that sonorous voice."I wouldn't do that if I were you".
Follow Through
แฟนตาซี · Alisa Leslie
Alisa_Leslie2693 years ago
Posted
An impressive,thoroughly fascinating novel that pulls you all the way in.The characters are very believable and we'll developed,good job author!
All you need is - immortality
แฟนตาซี · Leon_Kingraph
Alisa_Leslie2693 years ago
Replied to ecarran
thank u! glad u enjoyed it ❤️
Ch 20 Playing With Myself
Follow Through
แฟนตาซี · Alisa Leslie
Alisa_Leslie2693 years ago
Replied to NIL
Sure! could you take a look at my book and give me some tips,if you have time of course.Id really love any feedback you've got.The name of it is Follow Through.....let me know if u ever check it out ❤️
NIL
ย้อนยุค · NIL
Alisa_Leslie2694 years ago
Commented
thank u 4 supporting my book ❤️
"This is no time to grope her boy! She's choking! Give her a good swat on the back!" Yelled Glob and I tried to lift my head and aim my trusty eye daggers at him but alas,I was too busy suffocating.I heard Wayne's smooth,British voice explain to him that Keanu was trying to help me and Logan's steady "Oh my god,Oh my god,the meat is gonna kill her," on repeat.
Follow Through
แฟนตาซี · Alisa Leslie
Alisa_Leslie2694 years ago
Replied to Linda_Rutherford
lol,that's fine [img=recommend]
Ch 1040 THE WAR (11)
The Love of a Lycan
แฟนตาซี · jikanyotomare
Alisa_Leslie2694 years ago
Replied to ecarran
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I've been reading your comments etc and I love how engaging you are, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31 I've just started,lol).It's a helluva ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
Flash Marriage with a CEO Husband
สมัยใหม่ · Passion Honey
Alisa_Leslie2694 years ago
Replied to ecarran
Hi! sorry to contact you here,hope the author will forgive me! I've been reading your comments etc and I love how engaging you are, I'm hoping you'll be willing to give my novel Follow Through a read and give me an honest review? it's a fantasy romance full of comedy,adventure and steamy scenes that I'd love to get feedback on (chap 20 & 31 I've just started,lol).It's a helluva ride and a guaranteed laugh so I hope you'll enjoy it ❤️
Flash Marriage with a CEO Husband
สมัยใหม่ · Passion Honey