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Plus yellow eyes was recreating the seen with Sam’s mom on purpose. He didn’t do it to anyone else.

If I remember correctly Sam had quite a few friends in uni. If that was the case they would have died too.

I’m sorry but this entire chapter makes no sense. The only reason this happened to Mary was because she got yellow eye giving sam demon blood. And then yellow eyes did it to Sam’s girlfriend to get Sam back into hunting. To lead him on a path that would make him stronger to free Lucifer.

I mean if the theory that the sharingan is the projection of the soul and thus what you wish for when you go threw the process of opening the MS grants to the ability you want. Like obito wanted to get to rin to save her. Shisui wanted to make the village and clan agree with each other. Sasuke wanted revenge against his brother. So I mean technically we could see another uchiha have that ms ability. But I mean madara didn’t know that was going to be his ability. He chose obito cuz of the love he had and knew that killing rin would do enough emotional damage to open the ms. So obito was irrelevant. It could have been any other uchiha. I mean it could have even been itachi cuz he is only a few years younger then kakashi and obito. And he opens his sharigan near the end of the war and at the end of the war with the death of shisui he opens the ms

Not really. Yes obito played a part but madara can always replace him. And Danzo exist sooo

Fairy should be goblins and kannon is galleon

I don’t think people would thing you are admirering your own home as your parents just died and are probably thinking about them and thus all the memories about them in said house

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I mean he could also do side stories after he is done with this or even during it. We get lil snip bits at the end of each chapter to expand the inner world story

i think instead just rewrite the last few chapters where your introdusing characters that arent originaly in the world he is in. and just have the memories be fake and just something to tie him down to earth and the journey end with him getting back to his family or something..... im just spitballing here but the story has been great so far and the only chapter that me as a reader have problems with is the characters that you "introduced" a couple chapters ago that knew who the mc was and fought him