Yohao_Shakur

This book is great. It took common starting points and concepts and turned them into greatness. The characters are really well portrayed to the point that it's easy to understand who's who just by the way they act and talk. The game is really interesting, passing really well that there's no easy way for OPness, everything must be earned and that is absolutely amazing. The world is extremely interesting in-game and outside of it, making both sides become increasingly enjoyable to read. I hope the author come back to this great series ! And if you're reading this, mate, thanks for writing !

Rest well my dude ! Hope you enjoy your holiday !

the story is really interesting, the world is practically alive on it's own(the tutorial part is a bit too close to the tutorial arc of The Second Coming of Gluttony for comfort tho). My main problem here are the characters cause they are too unreasonable or completely not self aware(this may be a bit comedic at times tho), the unreasonableness is my main problem cause at times it's just not that needed or is every person on the tutorial a criminal before being reborn ? Cause dudes have not even a slight of reasonable common sense. Even the big bad villain is actually a spoiled brat that thinks he's the smartest person alive. Also it just makes no sense that the tutorial becomes an absolute bloodbath when they are literally scrapping every soldier they can to hold their defense positions, they just needed to have a bit of supervision on the first floor, just a bit and they would have 300 or so more soldiers even if just cannonfolder, but beggars can't be choosers and they clearly NEED more soldiers to remain holding their forts, it just makes no sense that they just don't care about loosing 300 potential soldiers cause of stupid stuff. Anyway mostly me ranting but it just became too unbearable to remain reading without even complaining a bit about these stuff.

I sincerely am skipping most of his mental brooding cause it's mostly repetition of what he already thought before, the story is really interesting, but all the mental brooding is a pain to read, even more during conversations, it becomes one dialogue phrase to two or three paragraphs of mental brooding, it's kind of exhausting.

And what a glorious death would that be !

can't he use the divine wish he got before when he saved the hard tutorial participants to take Jack with him ? Cause that sounds exactly like something that could be used for.

Dahell a billion moneys in debt is just too much, how did you leave it reach such a high value, dude ?

yep the main problem are parasites that can enter the body or attach to it to live on rivers.

I would die certainly cause I don't know how to swin properly, doggy swimming only take you so far lol

That's why it's always important to listen to what people say, kids.