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she better not get him back. exed is a past tense. do not get together, I beg you. save all dignity that is left. sht should be in the trash

i have read this before, I love the money and the skills, what I do hate is the tantananan~drum roll pls. the HAREM! guy suddenly becomes a big shot and felt like he could have the world,(he does, in future chaps maybe) he tells them he has a gf but they act like they didn't hear him, the proceed to act like brainless lovesick golddigging fools. question is, do you remember you have one(a gf?) or does she know you're not that great? just (act like) another reckless second/third gen. he got the skills, the money, but is he worth it? everything other than the harem, I love.

I have decided to stop reading. I'm impatient. They are all brainless soo no matter how hard MC tries face slap them, it will be worthless.

It was really interesting for me but the mc is too dumb and reliant. Just one of the proof is the couple times the system tries to unbind with the mc, like you don't curse at a system like ever! Just shows how low and infuriating she is. Flaunty, dumb, reliant, etc. Mc is disappointing also the system a bit. I would like a system like that and I would never curse at it. So ungrateful. O and the guy is useless. But I'mma still read it don't worry my minds got filter.

I originally had the same thoughts as you.

OH M G. I got hooked by this story. I gotta say that I was never planning to read any harry potter fanfic but when I saw that it was close to a hundred chapters I had to at least check it out. I LOVE IT it was a great experience, chapter after chaps. and I would even say that if it were not for the fact that it was a fan fiction it could even be a stand alone like be a real fantasy book (BTW this is a compliment) I would love love love to have more. p.s at the end of the update it left me thirsty for more so I found another such book you know a fan fic of potterverse(Yeah I know i'm a b!!!!) It was just not the same so I'm just gonna have to wait. lots of love. hehe

MORE PLEAAASSSEEE PRETTY PLEASE!

more please!!

more please!!