Grapes_R_Good

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I want to give your story a try, but it just looks like it is soaked in cliches. I'm not sure if you've seen how many similar stories there are like the premises you have right now in webnovel. I understand that there might be frustration with the quality of some, which would inspire some to create a better novel using the same premise, or simply inspired by their masterpieces, but it seems to me you are pumping quantity over quality. I just saw that you have joined just 3 days ago and already have 5 stories? I'm really worried that if I do start to read that you might get burnt out immediately and resort to copying other books with even more cliches. **please don't take this negatively as I understand that you might simply be a new author and are looking for room of growth, but I'm curious what you are using to make your novel stand out from the rest.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It was enjoyable while it lasted. I hope someday you might find the interest to continue writing.

Are you going to continue this story?

Think of how much potential you story has left, from the actual storyline plot to the potential develolpment of your character, as well as guild affairs. School is a priority but writing could be like a side hobby. I mean you can plan out a story line and create chapters when you want to. Don’t drop it yet, personally I’m fine with erratic update schedules unless there’s a big clif hanger

The novel itself is great with a good Mc….. However I think it’s dropped: https://www.mtlnovel.com/with-a-crippled-spiritual-core-i-become-the-boss-of-the-cultivation-world/v2-let-me-tell-you-one-more-thing/ :(

Think I found the copy: https://wuxiaworldsite.com/novel/blacksmith-the-tempering-begins-with-ones-flesh-wuxia-world-novel/

sorry for late reply, i only check my notifs on this site occasionally, and my answer to your question is another question, what do you expect from this community who spam random reviews on most novels making the star system totally useless? also, if you really don't like me doing this, than voice your opinion as well by making a forum or post this comment on every single review. sorry for being a bit sensitive, i just don't like the logic behind your comment. :P