Palosians

I love the story and some random references and the story itself got some comedy vibes with a little chuckle and I'm imagining like a random kId try to go to the forest alone and discover Excalibur

Sometimes dreaming is not just like fairy tales, or fantasy that you will rule your imaginary worlds. I love this line and the plot of the story So good

Good Job on your story The story is great it has a potential It's easy to read at dahil wala na akong maidagdag magtatagalog ako para kunware marami akong sinasabi

the punchline of the story haha

yep roleplay haha for easy reading access hahaha

This is the part when she is saying it then jack is Not inside the house

Nice men

Intelligence is not equivalent to wisdom

Nice

I love the story I think I will reading it weekly Nice artstyle and story concept Keep it up and I will follow the Story that I really enjoy