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I really liked what I've read so far, the only big problem being the lack of updates. Improve this, and the book's big problem will be solved.
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I think you can take out the quest part, but make Smoker realize that he must kill Blackbeard himself. Other than that, this is one of the best One Piece fics I've ever read.
5 - Fairy Tail
Nice cap
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Nice cap
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