Great novel! The action it is going well, the characters seems real, and the fact that the author is using am MC with an eastern nationality can show diverse this sequel it is going to be. I hope this story will begin as popular as Judah Gremory and Undeads are walking (same creations made by this author)

This story is really great. And I cannot believe this novel has won that bronze place in that contest, just because it is bronze doesn't mean that this thing is just bad, this one is really good because there is so many sci fi involved and the fact there are infinite different dimensions. Also, I think the character Jacob is a big pervert.

I like this story, even though it is just a short story this one got some chances to become a novel, but sometimes you have to respect the author's decision to make this creation a short story. My favorite character is Alex Rodriguez and even though I am not a Hispanic, I think his development started to become something great but I think he will one day snap and start to murder everybody to gain success. Also, the guy named Minoru is a big piece of shit!

Marcus and Ron are really good characters, also the fact that Fiona was in a relationship with Marcus, is really unexpected.

This novel is really great. The first volume was really cool, and can't wait for the others, and I understand the fact that your updates aren't daily, but do not worry, to create a good novel it requires the energy of the writer and some free days. Anyway, keep working!