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Lol_Man_7331

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2020-11-15 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73312yr
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    Lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol ol lol ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol Lo ol

    Ultimate Cypher (Marvel)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Anubis_Creationz
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Noice work man keep it up the but the grammar is not good enough you need to fix it and you need to ad some character development to skye she feels like a mobs in a anime

    Hahahahhahahaha
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · JarroLightfeather
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    The hero is back from now on pls accept my daily power stone

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: attack from the goo part 2 (Edited)
    DcMcu: kaiju system
    ไซไฟ · wiz161
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Damn

    Ch 8 Chapter 8: attack from the goo part 2 (Edited)
    DcMcu: kaiju system
    ไซไฟ · wiz161
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    He's back

    Ch 7 Chapter 7: Attack from the goo (Edited)
    DcMcu: kaiju system
    ไซไฟ · wiz161
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
    ตอบกลับถึง wiz161

    Second thanks man i found scp fic because of u

    SCP - The Game Console
    แฟนตาซี · Unholy_Student
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
    ตอบกลับถึง wiz161

    First of all r u gonna update ur fic?????

    SCP - The Game Console
    แฟนตาซี · Unholy_Student
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    I love this so i will give u my power stone everyday o ~ up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

    BATMAN BEYOND - DC FANFICTION
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Lonefrog
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    DC: A Spatial Manipulator
    ภาพยนตร์ · ToothlessS
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
    ตอบกลับถึง TheGodSage

    Wow, five minutes after i give you a rate and than you just reply it so quick

    A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]
    อื่นๆ · TheGodSage
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Hmm i think you lack of live in the dialogue i mean you should matching the dialogue with the character personalities like when he talk to spiderman, spiderman should be make a jokes like "wassap wood boy" or something like that (just my opinion) And sorry 4 my bad english

    In A Marvelous World With DnD Books
    ภาพยนตร์ · Demonchildz
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    You know you should do something abosut his memories lol many people hate it but yeahh im okay with that, and u should do more dialogue (my opinion) and be careful when he have a dialogue with young justice member they're all is a youngster that still have a puberty so u should do the dialogue with more 'live' in it. You know what it means right? Teenager have a different personalities Beastbot with his noisy, raven with her ignorance, kid flash that alomost same with beast boy, just make sure do some research of dc character personalities before you write the dialogue. And least: im sorry for my bad english senpai

    A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]
    อื่นๆ · TheGodSage
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Up up up up up o up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up up

    Marvel: Starting from the Bottom
    ภาพยนตร์ · ToothlessS
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  • Lol_Man_7331
    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    1 year with no news on his condition or even an activity, well his dead fam hey if u still alive answer me are u still want to writing ur stories or not

    DcMcu: kaiju system
    ไซไฟ · wiz161
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Bio-Mechanical Monster
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Monkey_Godking
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    Chakra Spider (Naruto X Marvel X DC)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EternalBliss4U
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Naruto: The Avengers
    ภาพยนตร์ · Daemon_Angelo17
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Swallowing The Spider (Linear)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · DragonField
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Fangs of the sea, Fenris! (One Piece fanfic)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · Brainstorming
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    Lol_Man_73313yr
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    Lee of the Wild (Girls of the Wild X The Breaker)
    อะนิเมะ&มังงะ · EternalBliss4U
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