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Author, I beg you, please remove this line. The cringe gave me goosebumps 🥲
Finished the rest of the chapters today and it's so bittersweet that one of my favorite novels has concluded.
This has, hands down became one of my favorite novels. I look forward to the updates daily(although it's been 2 days without any updates 😢). The storyline is unique in its own way. I love that her family can hear her inner thoughts and believe that the other members of the family can't. There are alot of parts to this that I love. Definitely recommend giving it a read.
Personally speaking, I feel like this book has potential ;it being a rebate type system, however the fact that it's EXTREMELY fast past, and I do very much emphasize the extremely really throws readers off because it's pace is faster than the luxury cars being introduced after only what...2 days? that alot of things are not fleshed out and the characters aren't given much depth because of this. For example, he suddenly drives a luxury car despite being poor and depressed 24-48 hours before yet his brother has 0 reactions or thoughts, his father's girlfriend is like 'oh well, he probably won the lottery. He takes his brother shopping, packs the bags into the car after purchasing a luxury watch(which, by calculations should have been over his budget) , yet there's no mention of the brother after and he just goes to his new condo to sleep....where did the little boy disappear to during the shopping trip? There are actually a lot more plots holes that stems from the novel being too fast pace. Hopefully the author slows down, reviews and revise and insert some necessary filler chapters and patch the holes.
I'm not gonna lie, I've read ALOT of transmigration/reincarnation type novels. This female lead is hands down the DUMBEST and THE WORST I've ever come across. She does and says things that would easily make people misunderstand and despise her, she's really just an unruly child and didn't learn a thing from her mistakes in her previous life. She's the #1 pushover in the book and definitely the most unlikable character. Almost 200 chapters later and she has achieved NOTHING for herself. She's lazy and unambitious without question. The story had potential, I honestly continued to read because I was desperately hoping she'd have some necessary character development. Hopes were dashed as she seems to get dumber and even more unreasonable the further I go. It's a no for me.
Firstly, please put the #incest tag. Initially, the system told him that he was REINCARNATED not TRANSMIGRATED, since he was worried about being in someone's body but the children he may have may not really be his, yet he had ZERO problems lusting and wanting to bang his own biological mother just on the first meeting. COMPLETE turn off. If he was transmigrated then I wouldn't say a thing Secondly, OML the grammar is killing me. Usually I wouldn't let a few grammatical mistakes hinder my reading since I'd just auto change it in my head, but oh lord the amount is putting my brain into overdrive, I really can't enjoy the experience even though I tried. All in all, it's the typical cabbage patch copy and paste young master-villainSystem-transmigration type story. There's really nothing novel about it tbh.
I'm not sure where this gem has been hiding😂But I'm so glad I found it🤣🤣Little Zombie is a complete menace! yet he's only a side character! That alone should tell you how much thought is put into each character. You have my full 5 stars!
I laughed until I cried🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Wasn't it a year ago?🤨or had I read it wrong?
I'm not gonna lie, I half expected him to be a green tea type or an arrogant 'world revolves around me' type, but he actually hasn't done anything malicious so far.