Titan_Alpha

does anyone knows its mtl name?

what I am saying is that according to soul society laws she will die as a direct participant and descendant of the main branch so you should say this au soul society is brutal as in canon if you want to save her

how brutal the soul society laws are and how they treat the loser or the traitors they don't even spare the innocent if a family is proved traitors the point I am making is it doesn't matter if kira is innocent or not if her family is impaled she is executed because she is the direct Descendants of the family like sõya as he was child when he was ordered to be executed with his family

before writing further I would like to suggest searching for Azashiro Family in the bleach on wiki.

the point I am making is who talks like that

rather than bleach fanfiction I feel like reading those Japanese novels where the Protagonist and the people around is dumb and naive

this is the third time you use the same lines differently

see the same thing you should write to other good writers as they don't keep repeating the same format again and again

can stop doing this we know he is grateful but you don't have to write 1/3 of the chapter just to write how he feels about every little detail or how grateful he is to others not to mention it's started to get annoying If you keep repeating that

it was before when he entered the city and it was mentioned when he bought their casino of their family that deal was struck