Nosferatu

You really need to work your focus. Dont jump around so suddenly and explain about other thing in the midst of something. Man, i skipped most of the chapter when you suddenly explaining about those unrelated people like when you explain about the background of a shopkeeper. I mean who care about what happened with the shopkeeper or story of some spirits who take about 2 or more chapter and then disappear into the coffin. Cmon work your focus and do the plot properly, 60 chapter wasted without proper introduction and you want to go premium? Really? What are you supposed to feed your reader? Info dump?

Imagine living 32 years of your useless life and still clueless about the way society operating even after reincarnating to the body of 12 years old kid. Even having degraded IQ and dehraded mentality. Remember, your reader isn't 8 years old kiddos who yearn for heroic tale in this site.