TheGratPrince

Author, if I were you, I'd slow down a bit and get more involved in the plot. You're too hasty and rather superficial when it comes to Mc's feelings. Although you say what Mc feels, it doesn't seem very believable, as you don't have enough information to gain empathy from us readers.

I just have one suggestion to make reading smoother. Make the paragraphs shorter.

I'm giving it five stars for a reason: the author has my admiration for mixing so many worlds without getting confused. That deserves admiration, I stopped counting how many worlds in the first chapter and I'm on the last, I just know there are many.

A M A Z I N G !!!!! A M A Z I N G !!!!! A M A Z I N G !!!!! A M A Z I N G !!!!! A M A Z I N G !!!!!A M A Z I N G !!!!!A M A Z I N G !!!!!A M A Z I N G !!!!!

Author, why not put Malenia? I think Miquella would allow her sister, after all, she deserves to be loved too. Especially after what happened to her.

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Tanks!

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