I really like your fics. The character of Andre is, in my opinion, rather interesting. Having him question his current situation and not just accept the loss of his entire previous life makes him more human, which for me is a plus. As well as I have the insertion of the "High trix", with the pokemon transformations is what interests me the most. In any case, great fics, I can't wait to read more.

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Why does the protagonist say he is 13? There should be 12. After all when he took the entrance exam it was said that he was 11 years old and in the meantime 11+1 months have passed, which is 1 year. Could someone please explain to me if I'm wrong somewhere. (Google trad)

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I don't see what real strength the MC is talking about hiding, right now he's just a 4 year old with average power. (Google trad)

Izuku took out an Uncle Ben, results Izuku will die.

The more I read, the more I feel like I'm watching an MHA version of the "Monster Musume" manga with Izuku as the MC. And I really like that. (Google trad)

I didn't know SunTzu had said everything in his book, maybe it was on a post-it. A crack this guy. (Google trad)

I don't understand the author's interest in insulting or being rude, for no apparent reason, with all the characters as soon as he mentions them. example : Minato = Sissy Intern god = sissy/ladyboy

I don't know where the white empire is located, however the pearl tower the author is talking about is in Shanghai. And for the blue empire, the Sapphire Skyscraper happens to be the Saphir Tower located in Istanbul. (Google trad) So the blue empire should be Turkey and the white empire apparently also China.

I'm surprised that MC keeps repeating that Mathilda is 11 while forgetting that he himself is also 11 physically. Mathilda having changed her age by recreating her identity.

Wasn't Mary Jane the one who got pregnant with Norman Osborn? (Google translation)

So Dio doesn't care about money, but charges them a glass of vegetable juice $1,000,000.

I think he doesn't need the Hamon to create ripples in the water if he throws a stone at it. (Google Translate)

There is justice.

I don't know if it's just me, but I find it a little disturbing that our MC talks to his parents like it's those friends rather than his parents. Let me explain the problems I find seeing our MC talking to these parents as well as: - Our MC is only 1 year old, but can read, (probably write) and speak at an adult level without either parent teaching her, or really surprising them. - That both parents dialogue with our MC as if she were at their level (in the sense of a close friend, rather than their 1 year old daughter). - And that our MC speaks in a strange way, (when we think that the people around him are his family), talking to them in a sustained way and sometimes using expressions that are out of place with his physical age (1 year) and mental (I think around 18). (Google trad)

Hi, as I write this comment the fanfic is at chapter 69, so I don't think anyone will answer me. But why can the MC use electrical devices, such as a cell phone, when we know that magic in Harry Potter burns out said devices and renders them normally unusable?

It's true, it's a horrible pain to enjoy reading a good chapter and seeing it end so quickly. (Google translation)

I'm glad to see a sequel to this novel. I eagerly await the sequel to read. (translated on google translate)