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why do you stop posting a week or two before the end of the month? I pay extra money to read in advance. Since noticing this pattern I will stop reading your novel

you are saying "am", but it should be "I am"

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

When translating you have to keep in mind English pronouns. Woman/Girl is her or she...A Man/boy is he or him or his. Due to incorrect translation of Pronouns the reading became a problem l.

This was one of the best stories I've ever read. Good job 👏

Dumby is a boy so the pronoun is he and his. For a girl it is she or her please fix this

daze = Dunby?

what happened?

i really love this story.

I'm enjoying this portion of the story line