Kingjp1

i immediately notice when i got on

nah i meant actual evil side the one where lucifer son in on not the grandson with the sacred divide gear

i am not saying i wont not fell betrayed but a mistake is still a mistake and i wont point out the mistake since i have decided to never read this fic again. i love the fate series and know almost everything about it so when i see things like this that it disgust me its like the authors purposely made everyone stupid to make the mc smart

i want you to watch over fate zero then come back to my comment please

hi author does aint the mc know he is in mlp

boo this man boooo

oh boy where you right also when you read this i have reach chapter 60 and made a review i want to say that the rating i gave is unbiased on my feelings however the review is i am going to keep reading to see if my feeling change though i also hope you keep up the good work for the readers that actually love your story and not let my review disturb you

anyone reading this read till the end its not that i hate the novel but that it aint all that special i enjoyed reading it ........no i am not gonna lie i did not like reading it the concept is good but the execution was meh when i realize that the story came from webnovel i just copyed and paste the review i had and but it here. but i can give the author a bit lea way since this might be their first novel in that case i cannot completely rate a novice to the rest of the novels i have read. i have read 50 chapters now so i can give a general review on this novel and all i have to say its dog water now hear me out the writing quality is 5/5, the characters 3/5, the world 5/5, the mc 3/5. now first of all it is extremely slow pace if you are willing to wait over 50 chapters to get over day one well then you can keep on reading but i expect day 2 to be even longer. Secondly the mc the guy that goes through many game resets is completely a idiot lets say you experience the same day over and over again would aint you be alarm if in one of those reset something unexpected happen that did not happen in any of the repeats in this regards the mc is alarm but not in the way you expect he realize the heroine are more human because theyn are going off script does he ask if they became sentient nooooo he rolls with it and became the BF for a support character that was suppose to sleep with the mc of the eroge and don't get me started on the heroines all in all the novel is a 3/5 but with my personal feeling its a 1/5 the author had a good concept but they terrible executed it resulting in one of those chinse novel about the heroines are able to read the mc's heart in fact thats exactly what this novel is

this is getting annoying i get that he has gone through it many times but he need to stop commenting on things that will happen in the future. i came here to read about a charater gaining sentience but what i am reading is a guide to the eroge like i don't need this information fam

yh it just frustrate me from time to time that authors not use something different and unique luckly this one does thank god