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Thanks! Scar does have her own lines. There are just some lines in the show that are too iconic not to include and in some cases the character who said it is not in the scene, but my oc is. Some people on this site in particular don’t take to my book too well because it is a fanfiction with a female protag. Most disheartening comments about how I write my original character in the series are actually only from men. I just don’t think my pov is what you guys are looking to read. Thank you for the input, but I enjoy what I write and what I have created xx

I’m not too sure why this is such a pressing issue for some readers. This is a walking dead fanfiction and they often follow the storyline closely. I appreciate people taking the time to read it but if they dont want to read about the walking dead tv series then this won’t be the book for them. When putting my writting on the internet I understand that i can’t please everyone. I just don’t understand why people are disappointed that im following the storyline in a fanfiction. Thanks for the review xx

I have a couple changes that my mc goes through. But its is a walking dead fanfiction so i do follow the storyline closely. I wanted to add my own character and thoughts/emotions into the scenes of the walking dead because I love the show so much. Therefore, this story may not be for some people if thats not what they are wanting to read xx

Hello! Thank you for the review and taking the time to read pretty far into it. It is a walking dead fanfiction so I did want to stick fairly close to the script and storyline because I enjoy it so much. I really just wanted to stick a pov from an outside character where you could look inside my brain on how I veiw each oc and what I would feel being in that moment with them. But I totally understand what you are saying and I appreciate the honesty xx

Very fair i often feel the same way! I dont want to spoil anything for my readers but i will say that this book is an extreme slow burn, majority of it is focused on gore and heartbreak. This book does not revolve entirely around romance and i think my steady readers can vouch for that. If you’re ever up for it, feel free to give it another shot xx

I mean it states in my book’s bio that the mc is a female, I’m not to sure why that matters if you are enjoying the book. To each their own though, thank you for giving it a shot! I will say though you are definitely missing out on some exciting twists xx

In the tv show, yes! You’ll have to read to see what happens here xx

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Doing that would not garauntee that Ben wouldn’t come back as a walker, which is what they didnt’t want. Also in that moment I don’t think you’d want to push your loved one off a building to save a bullet, you’d just risk it for them. My view on things, Thanks for the comment!

Thank you!! I will be seeing this book through and finishing it xx