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wth bro, it's so off-putting seeing ASOIAF character names. bruh...

Yes I know because of his sister? can u please stop reminding me?? Sister, sister ,sister, sister

wtf just happened at chp 5, is the author braindead?

One of the worst ff I've read. The interactions are thoughtless and everything else doesn't make sense. I hope this "author", reads more rather than write.

damn, might be the biggest headache I've read in a long time. The idea was weak, execution is worse, The grammar's disgusting, dialogues are like children's book. How can a person publish a written work like this and go "okay this good'. The writing won't even be accepted at highschool level essays.

bro, he's right. you literally addressed Saitama as s2pid in ur own review. So you really thought he is. Just admit it and move on, admitting can be sign of improving too, good luck.

yuck, author touch some grass please. you still have the time to divert from this path and stop listening to this kids so they will read ur story.

should have made to be able to die. iits ore exiciting

yuck, worst than OP MC. easy way out for a plot huh.

Poor man version of the Holy Necromancer I've read before.