The story is good and it is well written. I'm sure anyone who likes vampire stories will definitly like reading this. I think the story plot is very interesting. I hope you can continue on with the story and keep writing. I'm sure you will get more reviews.

Wow! You already wrote a lot of chapters. It will take me a while to read them all but so far I like the beginning of the story. You wrote a very interesting plot too. Keep on writing!

I think the story is great and I like the plot. You should definitely continue on writing, I kind of want to see how the story develops even more.