Herculeshermes9

Shhhhh, they don’t need to know that.

oooohhh, that's a better one, good job

If you want to insult someone, you really should think about what you say first. How is this even an insult, its just stupid. Your lack of brain capacity is causing me second hand embarrassment.

This novel is good, however the author seemed to forget what they were writing at a certain point and replaced characters and their backgrounds, at first Sophie was the MC's sister, then she became an orphan and just a subordinate. There also wasn't much character development for Alex, the fact that she was previously a guy with a family before was completely forgotten and then was said that she's an orphan instead. She also conveniently made incredibly stupid decisions as she got stronger for the sole purpose of pushing the plot forwards. The levelling also made no sense as it was clearly just use to level up characters when the author wanted them to, rather than making any sense in exp gain(which was never even explained properly) Overall, a good premise, however, with poor execution

I see that sarcasm isn’t something you understand, such a shame.

Was that what your girlfriend said? Sorry to hear that

NOT THE BIRDS

So elegant