Yes, it is bad and this is my first novel. English is not my first language and this novel is very cringe. Thank you for your feedback.

Geachte Peter, Dit boek is in Engels geschreven. En ja het is slecht en bevat vol met spellingfouten, bedankt voor u feedback. Groet, Jäger.

Hi there, sorry for not replying because I thought you're a bot and I was busy with things in real life but this sound pretty interesting! The contest

This is the best book I have ever read in my whole life. 11/10 by IGN

Hi, thank you for the compliment and the feedback, I have worked on the description, hope it will help you to understand what happened in the book

Very interesting