Hi everyone, my pen name is Night, it's nice to be here, I'm a beginner in writing so please bear with me. English is not my language but I will try my best to make you proud of me. Thank you ❤️❤️❤️
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In the beginning i feelt like I heard my daughter telling me about a great anime .... you know that feeling when someone is telling you , he was jumping there and almost get killed but he was more clever and did that and that .... you will feel really curious and want to see more. That's what made me feel this chapter. Still ,I wish I can see more dialog between people in the future chapters. I will keep reading. You are great ,keep it up .
The plot story is great. It made me confused sometimes because I don't know much about magic and magic people but it was intriguing me many times. At chapter 6 in the beginning I was confused about who is talking but reading it again I figured out . You made the bad people have some harsh time behind them and instead of hating them for making so much bad deeds I somehow finished by feeling bad for them . For example Samantha and Nicolas... they were using the magical creatures and hurt them but when Nicolas got killed I felt sorry for him, Same with Samantha , when she sow Nicolas dieing I felt sorry for her. All in one , you made your story catch life from the first word till the last . keep it up . Congratulations.
I am rejecting the ideea of believing that this 2 are humans .
you should take care , I don't really feel comfortable with this prince . it's giving me a bad feeling
crazy ..
oh ,isn't a dragon either 😅😅😅. I'm dead ...
oh ,it's a dragon 😍
what ???is Drake a vampire or something like that?😳😳😳😳
what do you mean silence? killing ???? Are you killing your own people?