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Retro_1mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วand vice versa
The right man in the wrong place, can make all the difference in the world.- Retro_1mthแปะแล้ว
Honest Review! Writing Quality:5/5-I see no grammar mistakes and it is much better than those trash translation and bad grammar Fics. Stability of Update:5/5-Since it's just four chapters in. Story development:5/5-Loving it. Mc is the grandson of Tobirama. Character desig:5/5-Good World Background:I am loving it!
- Retro_6mthแปะแล้ว
Since this book is just beginning, I'm reviewing it So the plot is well Mc transmigrates as Matsuda! The story is readable I did see some grammar mistakes but no typos. Keep going mate!
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_10mthตอบกลับถึง Injustice
I mean nah
ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_10mthตอบกลับถึง Tog_Python
It will be but will take a little while
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_10mthตอบกลับถึง I_am_Baal
i mean they HELPED fairy tail..you don't pay good with evil unless you a villian
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_10mthตอบกลับถึง Lyrical_Ivo
nah bro if I drop it's either if I die or things like that
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_10mthตอบกลับถึง I_am_Baal
I mean killing Vali is IDIOTIC
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_11mthตอบกลับถึง Ballad
Thanks mate
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_11mthตอบกลับถึง PriamustheBright
I got no idea about what thug shaker means
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_11mthแปะแล้ว
Very good fan-fic from the author. A no-harem fairy tail fan-fic so it's good. System ain't that op. Continue morea authorrrr. Really love how this is going on
หนังสือเล่มนี้ถูกลบแล้ว - Retro_11mthตอบกลับถึง The_Book
based?
"I know, I counted in Torchic in my original calculation. You're both women, therefore your opinion is worth barely half of what a man's is. Therefore 2v1, my statement stands." I remarked casually, knowing my played-up sexist comment would get me a newspaper roll smack to the head. - Retro_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 9 First Fight
- Retro_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว
This webnovel dawg, No warning necessary
(A/N: Smoke is bad for your health!! and don't smoke if you're not yet 18+!!) - Retro_11mthตอบกลับถึง NovannovanCh 8 First System Task
- Retro_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วCh 8 First System Task
- Retro_11mthเพิ่มความเห็นแล้วThe blonde guy is Izaki Shun, a friend of mine from primary school. We used to play together. He is a wily and crafty person. He doesn't like to associate with people. You can say that he is a Lonewolf, as for how I can get to know him. It all started when I accidentally rescued him from a group of people that wanted to gang on him. At first, I didn't want to get involved, but when i noticed that the kids near him appear to be weaker than me. I decided to help him. My principle is, if it is in the range that i can afford, I will help. If it exceeds my ability, I will close one eye and open one eye.