BruvSamurai

I do think the cooldown is too much of a gamery setting... I mean it doesn't make sense for a cooldown on spells if you still have mana leftover.

hello good sir

These uncapitalized i's are painful to my eyes. I like it.

Well see if these House Elves get the Uncle title

Every time that I try to read this fanfic, I lose more and more brain cells... I'm down to my last 2. I would remind you that this is merely my opinion.

Just from reading the first 5 chapters, I can say that this fanfic has quite a bit of potential. I've always wanted to read a Vision insert but could never find one that was any good. Hopefully this fanfic gets even better as it goes on. The only question I have is if this book will have any romance, and if so then who, if it isn't a big spoiler.

I honestly was enjoying the novel until the great 'bald one' was introduced. It kinda took any traction that this fanfic had away, and made it one of those generic Marvel fanfictions that are all over Webnovel.