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Thanks so much for taking the time to read ny book!🤗

Words per chapter seems kinda short but the exquisite writing makes up for it. One thing I'd suggest is more specification and description on the story setting(where they are). Overall, it was a good read and hope to see more from this novel.

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Really liking it so far, needs slight tweaks in the punctuations and grammar department, but it definitely has pretty high potential. Waiting for more and more chapters and hope you have a good day author.

Still new to to all this. This is my first novel so please be kind:). This was supposed to be a manga so it contains quite a bit of dialogue but I'll try to lessen the dialogues as the story progresses to make it more of a novel:). **. I might suck at this cause I don't really read much novels(or books in general).

It's great so far. Really like how you give emphasis to the fact that they are in China. The portrayal of actions were also quite detailed. I also liked the theme of the story in general. Great job author!

Thank you so very much, I wasn't sure the person who recieved the letter would like it. I'm glad you did!

Thhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhank you so much!

Thank you so much🤗