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Two words “chief kiss “ an absolutely good read 👌🎊🎊🎉

Im dropping this shit how come the pope just had a son but with no name juat a collection of rewards o really hate in the novel were the children are treated as shit and forgotten plus I he protection period of the church is 1 year how are both his wives able to gives birth before the year period is up understand the first wife because it’s 9months but the second?

Now it turned from the radiant church to holy light church ehat the hell

I love the story and the lore it’s building up the progress so far is nice with the mc becoming a god but the grammar is shit, it’s good for the couple chapter but then it start off with the mixing up of the church names making me confused and then I just read a chapter where their was no space every dialogue was jumbled into a paragraph . I’m trying to continue but plz fix these ecen if you have to use Ai to correct ur writing. This makes me feel like your tranlating a novel but messing up with simple mistakes

I think you need to do more editing. Are translating a late day finahes novel you not that you can use Ai to help example chat gpt plz the story is great but the grammar is ruining it

The grammar is really bad I love the story but please fix the grammar first the mc faction was called radian church, then glimmer church ehat the heck ?

I need more chapters 😭 I’m here waiting in class for an update this is torture

So far so good it’s one of the best new gen webnovel I’ve read , it’s funny, adventurous and full of action this webnovel can only be deceive in one phrase “fake it till you make it” 👌 but lease author never drop this I hope other can supports it an amazing webnovel 🎊🎊

Love it the plot, the characters chief kiss 😘

The story and concept is okay but writing is horrible I’m always confuse on who’s talking especially when two character go on a rant about a topic. The details are very lacking we need more background details and I think it would better to just dump the information on the power setting or world seeing instead of having us lost in the story. Because when you mention terms and expect us to know it’s annoying like Valkyrie/ the dolls/ CSS/ISC . The main problem for me it makes my head hurts om trying to understand who’s talking what dialogue maybe I’ll a try again in tomorrow but the story is really interesting