NatanDS_

Man where's the chapters? They are gone!!

Man, I really enjoyed your novel. The only thing I can say to improve is that at the beginning you put too much information about the system.

Good start

So it's a novel for cultured people cof cof... I appreciated very much this first chapter.

the novel is well written, in the grammar aspect, but has a lot of shit chat. Entire chapters of useless dialogues and stupid advices. And after the inicial chapters, the pace of the novel drop really bad. I do like a more realistic MC, but this issues really take me down. I don't know if I will give another chance.

it's good, but the MC hate for girls seems like a 12 old child, and his explanation for that is even worst. Every speech he made for why girls are so bad make me cringe, It's so annoying.

I don't get it, why he has a ability in fifth dimension, but is considered a third dimension human. What is necessary to ascend?

Another genocidal MC, but With the addition of having introduced slavery in modern society. Impossible to not feel sympathy for this MC, our little Hitler 😂

well, the cliche psychopathy protagonist and the sloooow pace story make me doing this review. And I wouldn't comment about the "beauty that take down empires " bullshit always that some girl show up, it's make me cringe every time.

I would liked more if the MC was not a side character, it's obvious that Nephis is the true MC, she has a better background story, better development, and much more charisma. But we have to follow Sunny that does anything relevant for dozens chapters and keep been dumb and week even though he has a divine grade aspect. I would like much more accompany Nephis than Sunny.