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RavineAbyss

RavineAbyss

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Just A Young Teen Trying To Write A Novel

2020-09-15 เข้าร่วมแล้วGlobal
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
    แปะแล้ว

    Seeing the upload schedule the author seems to have motivation issues, but nevertheless, the story is great and has tremendous potential. So, please......for the love of God, maintain a stable release schedule

    altalt
    〚Master of Centipedes〛
    แอคชั่น · IAmNotVoid
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    RavineAbyss2yr
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    Shameless author reviewing his own story. Hope to enjoy the novel!!

    altalt
    Demonic Requiem: The Epitome of Evil
    สมัยใหม่ · RavineAbyss
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
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    I liked the premise. But there were some things I could pick on. Still, the premise so far, has developed in a wonderful manner. I liked the Main character. Keep up the good work!

    altalt
    Nuclear Fusion Cultivator
    แฟนตาซี · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
    เพิ่มความเห็นแล้ว

    There's an opening quotation mark, no closing one. "Apprentice, you made a mistake, do you know what you should have done?" The martial.............

    ย่อหน้านี้ถูกลบแล้ว
    altalt
    Nuclear Fusion Cultivator
    แฟนตาซี · Ultimatedaywriter
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
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    Has potential. Although only 2 chapters have been released, I found the pacing and narration quite nice. Keep up the good work!

    altalt
    The Big in Little
    สมัยใหม่ · allshadesgreen
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
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    Only 4 chapters, so far, thus cannot say much. But the story developed till now, is well presented. I found chapter 2, the most exciting out of the chapters so, far. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes in the future.

    altalt
    The Warrior's Story
    แฟนตาซี · Mediocre_author
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  • RavineAbyss
    RavineAbyss2yr
    ตอบกลับถึง Pril_Debbarma

    Actually, no. I did not keep any tags about romance as the novel's primary focus would never be romance. It has more to do with the protagonist's personality. So, it would be more of a survival, mystery, and fantasy novel.

    altalt
    Catastrophic Transmigration Inside A Novel
    แฟนตาซี · RavineAbyss
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