interesting concept. the writing needs a bit of work but it's good enough for me

i'll give you 5 star just for being unique as this is a good story in my opinion anyways. keep up the good work i would like to see more

keep up the good work

Even though i haven't read the story yet i'm giving you 5 stars as this one of the only minecraft terraria fanfiction on this app which are both my favorite as well as it having many chapters.

I am liking you're story so far so keep up the good work.I have a request can you make the mc kill villain's make him an anti-hero where he can argue with heroes on how they suck as heroes and they should kill villain's for their crimes rather than being locked up and that UA school need to change their system and Why they should use guns like villain's won't expect to get shot by a sniper rifle whenever they try a villain speech.

I like the story very much and i want to share an idea for you i want a scene where vanoss rebuilds the banana bus and when their driving it they hit a gate which launches them into the sky at high speed like gta glitch and after flying while screaming they hit the head of a villain and just crushing him it will be amazing

the book is good but i have a question are you timemaster101 from wattpad if not this is just a copy with a bit of difference

i get it he's young and is excited in using his powers but. using bad words as a 12 year old that isn't normal kids don't usually do that unless he got influenced by the internet or by someone

with the ability of animal transformation she can become a jellyfish that has the venom to kill hundreds of people if she knows what type of jellyfish there are

Another chapter that was fast i like that keep up the good work

nice story so far

the two chapter is probably what dr strange felt when he touched the butterfly

nice

i like the personality of the main character he isn't afraid to change the plot just by a tiny bit

i think the mc shouldn't be open with the knowledge that came from his world as that might come back to bite him.

nice

is it safe to teach the natives of that world science? thats like giving a cave man a gun, ones every knows it they will be more deadly. as if they teach others about science thats gonna make them more powerful and getting enslaved by is higher

nice

i will try to support you and thx for the chapter

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