Bearscholar

That was, intense.

Not sure bout you but i would find that offputting. I mean if you had never met before.

love the chapter

I like it, the feeling of going somewhere. The build up and securing of cloths. As well as the build Sadness. And then lastly the meeting with the interesting person in her dream, can’t Exit to see where that goes.

A definite must read. I love the worldbuilding, not mention the magic is unraveling to be a lot of fun. The foreshadowing Is lovely, I can’t Wait to see how it all plays out. The charectors are interesting and you can relate with them. Well besides zack he is a bit of a no at all. 😂

I love the world building, and the foreshadowing. Got me wordering what’s Up with that white stag. And if zack is going to cut himself when he realizes how touch dual sword fighting Is.

Ohh snap, the dream descriptions are awesome. And the lead up to the attack really set the scene.

Im doing awesome. Keep up the writing, i know you can succed.

Your doing awesome work chantie, keep it up