Beck_E

A week... how long will we have to wait, I wonder?

Suggested edit: "none" safe sex... this word choice feels awkward. no safe sex, unsafe sex, risky sex might be clearer. mos/ of the sex has been protected, or did he pierce the condoms?

Suggested edit: The light was "on".

Suggested edit: to catch his "cum" for easy cleanup

I appreciate Max's' viewpoint, I really do. I rounds out the story well. But great googly mooglies the make up smex had better be volcanic, magma core level smoldering hot. I seriously can't go much longer without real genuine closure for these two. The suspense is torture!

Suggested edit: had been "persued" his whole life

Suggested edit: up until "now"

Siggested edit: satchel? should it be sachet?

Suggested edit: Andre? Andrew.

I wish you the greatest of luck with figuring out your best solution. I have certainly tried a lot to manage my health, and very little of the advice came from a doctor. Do your best to use your sense of what is right for you. Be patient with yourself and know that your adoring fans are here cherring you on with whatever you find as your best solution both for your experience as a writer but also your health as a fabulous person.